Reality: A Metadventure

Dregadude wrote:Since Gelatino did a thread linking to his adventure I figured I'd do mine to drum up business to increase awareness of a mostly readerless adventure which I think is better than quite a few of those I read.

Basically Reality: A Metadventure is four adventures in one, since at the start a character views a screen where he has three options of adventures and after viewing all three his own adventure will start. The three adventures are A Christmas Adventure, THE SPORTS, and Double Helix which is the one the readers selected first. Right now I'd say we're about a third of the way through Double Helix, and then the option to view the other two adventures will be open. All of the adventures' premises have been fully plotted out and basically I just need commands and time to fulfill them. In the future I imagine Reality: A Metadventure will continue to be funny and exciting, probably even more so than it is now.

As far as art, I definitely improved later on, going from monochrome scribbles to grayscale scribbles to colorful scribbles. I'm only getting more skilled as time goes on.

Anyways if I didn't bore you to death by now the adventure is here and the mirror is here. I'd like you to at least read it through since it's not very long, even if you don't submit a command, and maybe give me your opinion on the adventure here so I can make it even better. Thanks!